ARC Review – Mark of the Witch by Maggie Shayne

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ARC Review – Mark of the Witch by Maggie ShayneMark of the Witch by Maggie Shayne
Series: The Portal #1
Published by Harlequin Mira on September 18, 2012
Genres: Paranormal Romance
Pages: 394
Format: eARC
Source: Netgalley
From New York Times bestselling author Maggie Shayne comes the first novel in her thrilling new trilogy, THE PORTAL She was born to save what he is sworn to destroy... 

A lapsed Wiccan, Indira Simon doesn't believe in magic anymore. But when strange dreams of being sacrificed to an ancient Babylonian god have her waking up with real rope burns on her wrists, she's forced to acknowledge that she may have been too hasty in her rejection of the unknown. Then she meets mysterious and handsome Father Tomas. Emerging from the secrecy of an obscure Gnostic sect, he arrives with stories of a demon, a trio of warrior witches-and Indira's sacred calling. Yet there's something even Tomas doesn't know, an inescapable truth that will force him to choose between saving the life of the woman he's come to love-and saving the world.

I recently became a Maggie Shayne fan with her new series Brown and Deluca.  I really enjoyed her writing style and her crafting of a memorable heroine.  As a result, I was more than excited to delve into the first book in her Portal series, MARK OF THE WITCH.  Can I admit I came in with high expectations and left with some disappointment? 

The premise of MARK OF THE WITCH is fantastic.  A young woman, Indira, is a Wiccan who has lost faith and is suffering from nightmares of being thrown from a cliff – nightmares that feel too real to only be dreams.  Enter a priest, Father Tomas, who is also questioning his faith, add to that a demon demanding to be set free, and finish it with a connection between all three of them that can change the course of the world and you have the ingredients of a great story.  Indira has to figure out who she is and what her connection is to Tomas and the demon before it’s too late.  The plot deals with past lives, Wiccan ritual, and religious intolerance.  It’s a great premise, filled with complexity and mystery.  I was drawn into trying to figure out who could be trusted and the role Indira must play in the course of events.  There was something that felt fresh and different in the world and plot of MARK OF THE WITCH that kept me turning the page.

And of course there’s a “but.”  BUT, I have to admit, I felt let down by certain aspects of the story.  First, the reason Indira let go of her Wiccan beliefs — because she did a spell to find her true love and it didn’t work?  Seems like you should try a few more before wholly giving up on your faith.  This is a story that revolves around past lives, reincarnation, and lovers fated to repeat history.  I wanted to learn more about Indira’s past, some flashback to a childhood that made her feel different, how she came to Wicca, etc.  There was a curious lack of backstory for her that felt strange.  Also, some of the writing with regards to the romance felt melodramatic.  I admit to rolling my eyes a few times.  And Tomas…I just couldn’t get into him.  He’s faced with the tough decision of essentially choosing between the woman he is falling in love with or the man who practically raised him; he must choose between the beliefs he’s been indoctrinated in his entire life versus the unknown that Indira represents.  Yes, I understand he’s questioning his faith; yes, I understand he’s just met a woman who has majorly shifted his worldview.  But honestly?  Nut up, dude.  Make a decision.  Stand up for what you feel is right and don’t defer to someone or something you feel in your gut isn’t good.  His constant waffling and deference to a man he soon realizes he cannot trust got to be too frustrating after a while.

In the end, MARK OF THE WITCH is a PNR that felt fresh and different with regards to the “paranormal” but weak in the “romance.”  The strong premise just wasn’t enough for me to recommend it highly.  Right down the middle:  2.5 Howls!      


About Maggie Shayne

Maggie Shayne is best known as the New York Times bestselling author of more than 50 novels, nearly 30 novellas, a former soap writer, (The Guiding Light, As the World Turns,) a former advice columnist (Shayne on You,) and RITA Award winner. But what’s less known about her is that she’s been a practicing Witch for almost as long as she’s been a published author.

Known within the Craft of the Wise as LadyHawk the Mythmaker, Maggie studied in the Black Forest Circle Seminary for three years, earning her 1st, 2nd, and 3rd degree elevations there. A licensed minister of Wicca, Maggie was later made a Craft Elder, and co-founded a new Wiccan tradition called RavenMyst Circle. Her coven, The Coven of the Redtail Hawk, turned out five new high priestesses, several of whom went on to form covens of their own, and making Maggie, according to the Old Ways, A Witch Queen.

While The Portal series is entirely fictional, and necessarily brimming with special effects, any portions of the stories pertaining to the actual practices and teachings of witchcraft are entirely authentic. Due to the oathbound nature of some Wiccan rites several of the spells and other rituals, particularly rituals of Initiation and elevation, have been altered, abbreviated, or are deliberately vague. These rites are revealed only to Initiated Witches who reach the appropriate levels of study in traditional Wiccan Covens.

If learning about real witchcraft is your goal, I’ll soon be releasing a nonfiction book, The Magick of the Witches, on that very topic. (Watch this site.) In the meantime, I strongly recommend books by Silver RavenWolf, Scott Cunningham, Dorothy Morrison, Gail Wood, and others, which will give you all the information you need to to decide if it’s the path for you, and to begin your own solitary practice.

4 Responses to “ARC Review – Mark of the Witch by Maggie Shayne”

    • shewolfreads

      I really liked her Brown and Deluca series so my expectations were high. For some reason, this one just didn’t grab me.